Interim Crit 03 | Panels' comments

1. Expand my urban village narration ( how I define urban village in my scheme)

2. Add narration how anybody else use the building ( immediate neighboring nursing homes as supplementary program )

3. Feasibility study

4. Make ground floor plan drawing to be more inviting (maybe lighten the boundary line)

5. Enhance on how the site to be a borrowed urban space (neighboring unit can use it, make it a therapeutic area )

6. Roof profile doesn’t reflect local weather . (make building more tropical)

7. To have one Technical board to showcase technical considerations and sustainable approach

8. Use sectional perspective to elaborate transition from private to public

9. Section need to put graphic , currently does not show fluidity of space.